justingame44

Hey I noticed your How to train Your Dragon fan.
          
          I made some of my own How to train Your Dragon books and I'm trying to get more feedback on them.
          
          Can you please read this one and tell me what you think please as it would mean a lot to me.
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/343771393?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=justingame44&wp_originator=AwjnlAhNbNclVpBCha1XrMf3R0Gl79BEBk89o4ryDd0bnlj6l5sTvswTfJpxvc8C8UrtT%2FvmCJWPug9CZlpV%2B61A077Od3q%2F%2BQIJ4i82dr8C2477pvDRxzDXiE%2Bymx4I

CalmerDown

@justingame44 skip to 2:18 if u want
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CalmerDown

@justingame44 watch this, this is a motivational speech u needed:
            https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gsVOBH37Phw&ab_channel=Voix
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CalmerDown

@justingame44 make ur plots unpredictable for the human brain. make a plot that has many ways to go thru and pick one of the ways for the story and do a big skip when doing a surprise like something good/bad happens or something big happens like this
            
            
            "As (A) prepared to punch (B) while (B) prepared to block it....
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            
            But (A) was able to punch thru (B)'s chest as (B)'s body fall lifelessly to the ground"
            
            Make ur viewers cry like someone did to me while reading a KNY fic or watching sad animes
            
            P.S : I still have emotional trauma because of Oshi No Ko and some sad fics and animes
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