CalveeEevee

Finally, with that, it is complete. The rewrites have been put in and the story is born anew.

luistheterd

@CalveeEevee I will start a world war 3 with you man
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luistheterd

Wow man, you really know how to make people leave you're mini community. I really REALLY like your story. but after all this waiting for what? like 9 FRICKIN MONTHS!?!? I really have waited 9 months for nothing. Well..... no one really knows. Maybe your just having a hard time going through someones death or something  like that. But i'll still ask you. not for me,but for everyone that supports you. will you please continue your story? and if you can't then...... i understand but everyone will still be there for you. thank you, Calvee E
          evee.

CalveeEevee

Alright. Rewriting of the previous chapters is now done. Before I post them, however, I have some things I need to mention, as a few things have changed. Apart from just rereading to get to know the story so far again, I recommend you re-read to see what has changed, as a few things that have changed are quite important. However I shall list a few here.
          
          First, renames for the characters. Going forward, these will be the names of the characters (Any character not mentioned keeps their original name)
          
          Dusk -> Noah
          Sylive -> Inigo
          Saskia (Lana's surname) -> Savill
          Suko (Noah's Surname) -> Lowell
          Figika -> Pearl
          Undu Kisiki -> Hermes (Was also changed from male espeon to male zeraora)
          
          On top of that, some story changes (but not all)
          
          Lana's depression will be toned down. Like, a lot. 
          
          Inigo (Sylive) will grow on Noah (Dusk) and be less of a dick sooner than originally planned(as fun as he is to write. Still the same in the already written chapters)
          
          Noah (Dusk) doesn't find an article about how to tie a noose, but rather a more general article about suicide and depression. This means he doesn't truly know fully about her mental health.
          
          Noah (Dusk) no longer finds the drawing of him and Lana together, causing him to no longer suspect her feelings for him.
          
          
          On top of this, a lot of dialogue has been changed that doesn't necessarily change the story.
          
          I'm sorry for the long announcement, as well as all the announcements since yesterday, but I shall now get to work replacing the original chapters. 
          
          ~ Your fluffiest of "authors"

ThunderStorm-bringer

@CalveeEevee woo. Lots of updates. I enjoyed reading your story the first time. So i'm sure i'll enjoy re-reading it too! ^w^
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CalveeEevee

Quick Update
          
          I am currently working on my rewrites of the chapters that are already out. I've currently done chapters 1-4, though this will probably take until tomorrow. With my ADHD and ADD, it's quite hard to do one single thing for long periods of time.
          
          This means that, as of now, I'm leaning more towards the idea of continuing the book, but there will be a few changes as I mentioned before. Nothing that changes the story too much, but changes nonetheless.
          
          ~Your Fluffy Pal

CalveeEevee

Should mention, the edits are not currently live. They are in private Google docs for now, as I wanna finish them and put them in at the same time.
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CalveeEevee

Another quick update, as of now, Burning Love (my attempt at a yandere story) is now gone, I will not be writing more chapters. This is the official post-mortem for the book because it is dead and will likely stay dead. Sorry if anybody actually liked it, but I just don't.

ImaReadingRaptor

@CalveeEevee yo! It's been a while!
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CalveeEevee

(This is taken from the newest A/N for my book, for those who no longer have it in their libraries)
          
          Hey. Yeah, I know, an Author's note after... Jesus, two years is a bit disappointing, isn't it? Well, I'm not sure if the news here will be good or bad.
          
          So I've been reading through this story, having a sudden inspiration, and... Well, let's just say I've cringed quite a bit at what is here. Not to mention I'm worried I've probably offended some people with a few of my topics that I'm afraid I may or may not have portrayed in a respectful manner.
          
          Essentially, if you're even reading this after seeing that the newest part to a story that hasn't been updated in a while is an Author's Note, I'm trying to see how much interest people have for this story. If I should actually continue it or not. Either way I plan to start a new story with a more lighthearted tone.
          
          If I do continue the story, there will probably be a few changes. Nothing massive or anything, but names will probably change, and the severity of some topics will probably be toned down. If I do not, the story will probably just be deleted, as I'm not a fan of the idea of leaving scrapped or dropped books on the platform for people to be disappointed by. Comment with whatever answer you please, it can be a simple "Yes" or "No." Or it could be something more. 
          
          Thank you for reading, and I am sorry for the wait. 
          ~ Your Fluffy Eevee

king234456

@CalveeEevee i think you should finish it and not worry about people opinions 
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