hi...so I've been reading your book about bucky barnes and i love it. I love your writing style and I love that you put so much effort into the descriptions but, just some friendly advice
- writer to writer - I don't want to sound mean or anything of the sort but I feel that your a bit too descriptive, sometimes you add unnecessary details that may paint the picture well but were a bit to much.
I struggle with this as well. I've been told I'm one of the best writers in my class and I paint the picture with words buy the only reason why I never get chosen in contested is because I'm over descriptive and it can cause the reader to become bored before they finish the story because the description is overwhelming and overpowering the actual plot and events.
Now I'm not saying I don't enjoy your work because I do, I really do love it. Your an amazing writer and I hope you don't feel like I'm attacking your work. I just wanted to spread so friendly advice.