@moodybookfreak No problem!!! I actually fanned you because I loved the beginning of your story The Unspoken Words of Arcadia Dream. I wasn’t able to write a review earlier because I was in a rush, but I can’t wait for you to post more! Everything about it is just so original (the title, for example, immediately intrigued me, and I loved the part about the tree!). Anyways, cliffhanger!!! =) The one thing I would say as constructive criticism is watch your sentence lengths... I realized that a lot of them were run on sentences, which I can totally relate to. Overall, its a pretty minor issue, just something to look out for. Like I said, all in all I love the story line and I look forward to your next post!
~ Campion =D