@GeneralZombie has been re-writing this book due to the fact that, well my writing skills are horrible and I have to say the first chapter got me already and its about 10000X better than this first one... The new one will have more character devolpment, new characters, way better dialogue and writing and will showcase the ideas way better! So look forward to that, it will be soon because i just finished the cover for it today and its amazing. Just have to get the time to publish the first couple of chapters! Thank you all and we look forward to this new version!