Fast&Furious7_isLife

Please finish this book if your still alive!!!!

Is this it for ,the mate he never wanted because it's very interested .and I see where you last updated last year and now I need to finish the book with eager,I need to know what's going on

Plz update the book the mate he never wanted.it's one of most gripping stories on werewolves on wattpad.we need closure 

Are you gonna update your book or what? It's been over a year... the books name is the mate he never wanted. 

Can u pls update the mate he never wanted...its been months. If u r not going to continue then pls tell us

Hope you write more werewolf story lines your good.

Would love reading the rest you have me wanting the rest of the story your a awesome writer

Could u plz update 

Omg someone tat has the same lug as me for fast n furious 

*blushes*Well you're grammar is pretty good so you don't have to worry about that. Maybe you could work on your description, like of people and places.  Instead of putting stuff in brackets for example, instead of
          
          " I'm apart of the alpha family ( that is in charge of the pack)"
          
          You could have:
          
          "I'm apart of the alpha famly, - the family that runs the pack"
          
          Or
          
          "I'm apart of the alpha family, headed by my father ; the Alpha, who runs the pack"
          
          I dunno. Is this helping at all? I hope it does. Keep writing. You'll develop as you go along. It's good so far though.  Also, try not to switch up the POV's so often.  :)