Caracette

The only comment I've received thus far has been IRL from an elderly citizen friend of mine, and she said it was "perhaps too descriptive".
          	I take inspiration from Robert Jordan's writing style - among others, so that was just inspiration to push for more description!

shadowsleek

@Caracette better too descriptive instead of too brief I say lol. A few words can have the greatest impact but a million words is like a million stars, no one wants to count them but they make the night beautiful nonetheless
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Caracette

The only comment I've received thus far has been IRL from an elderly citizen friend of mine, and she said it was "perhaps too descriptive".
          I take inspiration from Robert Jordan's writing style - among others, so that was just inspiration to push for more description!

shadowsleek

@Caracette better too descriptive instead of too brief I say lol. A few words can have the greatest impact but a million words is like a million stars, no one wants to count them but they make the night beautiful nonetheless
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