Caramel345

I lay down on my porch. Staring at a beautiful stars. A gentle breeze swayed over me. Hours had passed. I sat up, and inched towards my dog; Bean. I looked on the road, car after car passing. None turning into my long driveway, I sighed. Stood up, and walked toward the door.
          	"not today" I mumbled.
          	
          	I looked back, noticing Bean wasn't following me. He was still staring at the road. 
          	"You coming?" I said. Bean gave the road a last glance before following me to the door.
          	
          	I came inside, my mom gave me a sympathetic look. 
          	"He'll come back" she said, always looking on the brighter side of things. 
          	I looked at her sternly, "what if he doesn't?" 
          	She gave me a hard glare, she hates it when I talk negative. 
          	
          	"He will." She said softly. 
          	
          	I would like it o post a few chapters of a book I'm writing, tell me what you think of the preface above!

kayleeandhens

It's actually really good.  My first book was the equivalent to toilet paper.
Reply

Caramel345

I lay down on my porch. Staring at a beautiful stars. A gentle breeze swayed over me. Hours had passed. I sat up, and inched towards my dog; Bean. I looked on the road, car after car passing. None turning into my long driveway, I sighed. Stood up, and walked toward the door.
          "not today" I mumbled.
          
          I looked back, noticing Bean wasn't following me. He was still staring at the road. 
          "You coming?" I said. Bean gave the road a last glance before following me to the door.
          
          I came inside, my mom gave me a sympathetic look. 
          "He'll come back" she said, always looking on the brighter side of things. 
          I looked at her sternly, "what if he doesn't?" 
          She gave me a hard glare, she hates it when I talk negative. 
          
          "He will." She said softly. 
          
          I would like it o post a few chapters of a book I'm writing, tell me what you think of the preface above!

kayleeandhens

It's actually really good.  My first book was the equivalent to toilet paper.
Reply