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I decided to start writing again to release stress ans stuff. So, here? https://www.wattpad.com/story/101967150

Any good Calum Hood fanfics guys?? Or ATL ones!? 

Hey I am reading the Moon Goddesses Daughter! And I wanted to help you! I love where this story is going, but (and I have trouble with this) you need to expand on it. You need filler parts, for example when Kailua is waiting for Grayson, it goes automatically to when he gets there. Instead you should add sentences that fill in the transition time. You could have her look around at her surroundings and describe the room until Grayson comes bursting in. Parts like this really help the story flow and help your readers picture what is going on better. I would love to help you out and be your editor/adviser if you would have me!

@-CuddlingMuke- have saved them already I'll let you know what I think could you possibly read mine and let me know what you think xx

@KellyyBuckleyy welcome could you read mine or at least one of them and let me know what I can do better because your an amazing writer xxx

@JessicaMason206 
          Yeah sure :3 
          Message me sometimes :D

@Allure_ your welco!e and read my fabrics I'm sure you'd like them and maybe we could private chat and become friends xx

Thankyou for voting on Bad Boy Attraction,it means alot :3