Hello people, honestly I'm just thinking about my book 'angels and demons' because I can't shake the feeling that some of the chapters lack in the emotions and the message I wanted to bring across. I'm not focusing on any one character anymore. I just want you people to know that some of the drama is unnecessary and is probably a little over dramatic. I wanted to push limits of what would happen if these characters from two different worlds ended up crossing and now have no choice but to trust each other. I feel like a lot my chapters lost that sense of story and I'm bringing it back and focusing on problems that other characters are having. Much like Virgo' OCD, or Capricorn's struggle with everything. I use to focus on one character and I realized that wasn't interesting. I know this a long rant and probably doesn't make any sense but I feel like I needed to address this problem. Thank you all.
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