Caridad Pineiro

Hey dear, so sorry to infringe into your privacy. Your account really caught my eyes and my heart felt for it so I decided to say hi. Can I please be a friend?

Hello dearie 

@wannabealyssaxx AHHH I DIDNT REALIZE YOU WROTE ON MY MADRES WALL!!! :) YOU ARE SERIOUSLY THE BEST! 

@GwenHankins You're welcome.  My suggestion would be leave it  the prologue at the moment when he finds her and she has to decide whether to take him over the cliff with her or what else she can do.  That sets up this huge black moment that leaves the reader wondering and then you can pop back in time and tell the story that leads to this event.  Good luck with it!

Thank you for reading my "Prologue" for Pristine Halo! I exist! Strange comment--but you have no idea what it means to me at this hour and minute. The "Prologue" is actually a scene that has been tormenting me for years. I couldn't get the story out. I posted that scene--as a touchstone to find the fight in me. I need  that fighting instinct. This was the story I could never write--although its right "here".  There are a whole lot of "nevers" in front of me. What a difference a day and a person can make! Thank you! PS There are other scenes--this scene just came up first. Thank you. Now I know SomeOne is out there.  I can't believe you found me! *happy dance* :)

@RynoWriter1 You're welcome!  Looking forward to reading your work.

@wannabealyssaxx Thank you!  Looking forward to reading your work also.  Sammie is the best. I am so lucky she's my daughter and best friend!

@CathleenRoss Thank you, Cathleen!  It was very exciting to be nominated last year.  I appreciate you taking the time to do that.  Looking forward to reading your work!

Hi Caridad
          Thanks for the follow. I judged you in the Rita one year and gave you full marks. Nice to meet you here.
          Best
          Cathleen
          

@BelleSara Thanks! Looking forward to spending time with you guys!