CarinaBachmann

http://thefirstfashioncreator.wordpress.com/2011/07/07/almost-american-style/
          	
          	I think some of you might like this post ;)
          	It's me in the picture ^^

ShiningLikeFireworks

loved to check out your works! and thanks for the criticism, glad to no that somone actually out there doesnt like everything about my story, and told me too! by the way, thats the second thing i have EVER written, im trying to improve, and i just got an editor and i told her shes welcome to change anything to make it sound better, so hopefully it will help. i really want to improve my writing, so thanks for giving me some encouragement to do just that!!! ill check out yr story soon, c u around! byeeeee8)