CaringForNoOne

@Loyalty I guess I'll do Seth, cause I'm running out of ideas. And I'll check it out now!

understudied

@CaringForNoOne Maybe you could do...
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          -He glared down at me. He was no longer the person I wanted him to be. Those eyes, that used to be filled with love was now cold and empty. I just can't believe that I used to look up to him.
          
          "What?" I shot back at him. I wasn't scared. I just never wanted to get hurt. He ruined my life for years. I wouldn't let him take it anymore.
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          Well, I'll help you with that much. Let me know if you need more help, or if you're completely stuck, I could give you some ideas.

CaringForNoOne

@Loyalty Okay. And I have a bit of the first chapter, I'm kind of stuck though;
          
          “Seth?” My name was said in such venom, I didn’t even flinch. I was used to it, so I was not longer jittery or nervous when it came to my father. I opened my eyes, snapping back into reality. I stared into my father’s brown eyes as -
          
          I'm a bit stuck. :D