Caris-Ben

I want to write anither novel on inkitt. An tge name is.. "MY CONTRACT DEMON PRINCE HUSBAND".

jennypatel

Hello everyone,
          I’ve started writing my own book, and it would mean a lot if you gave it a chance. This is my first story, and I’m putting all my effort into it.
          I’m sorry for reaching out on your ID like this, but I wanted to share my book and kindly ask for your support.
          Your reads, votes, and comments would really motivate me to keep writing. Thank you so much. ✨
          If you love romance, mafia, action, peace, mystery, strong female leads, and independence, then this book is for you.
          
          Couples :-
          
          Shivansh Roy x Kanika Ahir
          Naksh Roy x Arohi Dixit
          Rutvik Oberoi x Heer Malhotra
          
          Tropes :-
          
          Enemies to Lovers
          Love at First Sight
          Childhood Sweethearts
          Lovers to Haters
          CEOs
          
          I hope you all will give my book a chance. ✨
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/410865528⁠�
          
          U can visit my id and find the book .I will be blessed if u give my book a chance . 
          For update u can follow me on snap chat 
          Author_tulip
           https://www.wattpad.com/story/410865528?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=jennypatel

WovenWritess

Heyyy there!! I just wanted to say that your story is so good so far, you're doing amazing!!!  The only tiny thing is, since it dives straight into Chapter 1 without many details about the characters yet, it was a little bit confusing to follow at first. I think adding just a sprinkle of background or context early on would make it absolutely perfect!! ✨ Also, I’m a new author myself—I actually just finished my first book and am working on my second. If you ever have a free moment, I’d be so happy if you could check it out and let me know what you think!! Keep up the incredible work, sending you lots of writing luck!!!

Caris-Ben

@WovenWritess ok tanx
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WovenWritess

@Caris-Ben Aw, of course! ❤️ By 'sprinkles,' I mean a tiny bit of setup so the reader can easily figure out who the main leads are right away, since it’s currently a bit hard to tell who to focus on!!
            ​A great way to fix this is to add a small introduction to them when they first appear, along with a little bit of the characters' aesthetic—like a key detail about their style, a specific vibe, or what they look like.
            ​It can also just be a tiny bit of grounding for the reader. For example, you could add a sentence or two describing the setting right away so we can visualize where they are, or give a quick hint about how the main character is feeling in that moment. Even just a small detail about their expression or vibe helps us connect with them instantly! You've got this!!! ✨
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Caris-Ben

@WovenWritess i would like you to advice me in the new sprinkles i should add
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DarkInkAnnie

Hey Caris. Thanks for the follow

Caris-Ben

@DarkInkAnnie ok tanx
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DarkInkAnnie

@Caris-Ben Heyyyy.  By the way, it's not as huge as you're making it seem. Anyways, I just wrote my stories and all. But the thing is that I always used tags for easy access to my story. For Me, that's all I do.
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Caris-Ben

@DarkInkAnnie may i ask. How did you get lots of reads
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