@akira_ender I can try, lol. I think one of the best things you could do is make sure you use correct grammar, try to make people feel like they’re right there with the characters, but don’t over-explain (been there, done that, got the t-shirt), and don’t be afraid to ask more experienced writers to read your book, if they really like it, they’ll most-likely put it in a reading-list, from there other people will start to see it, and then you're set. All you have to do from there is be patient, just remember that everyone starts somewhere. And frankly, you’re already off to a great start.