Could you please critique my story, Dear Nick? It's a Teen Fiction. :) I'd really appreciate any comments you can give me. Thank you.
http://www.wattpad.com/story/6268167-dear-nick
It's about a girl named Jolin, who lives in Taiwan and is going through a rough time at school because she feels obliged to study but she doesn't know what for. So she writes to Nick Jonas, just for someone to confide in. She has a couple of friends, ex Jesse, Vicky, Stacie... but she isn't really close to any of them.
btw I've already fanned :)