CarmenOx

Started my new story Fast Friends, check it out, it's a story about friendships in high school from a new point of view.

CarmenOx

I only have 2 more critiques to do before I start to accept another batch. Other than that I'm updating all of my stories by the end of the night. From now on the books with the most demand are the ones that will be updated seeing as I am so busy so please vote and comment on what you'd like to see more of.

Tsun-YuYang

Could you please critique my story, Dear Nick? It's a Teen Fiction.  :) I'd really appreciate any comments you can give me. Thank you. 
          
          http://www.wattpad.com/story/6268167-dear-nick
          
          It's about a girl named Jolin, who lives in Taiwan and is going through a rough time at school because she feels obliged to study but she doesn't know what for. So she writes to Nick Jonas, just for someone to confide in. She has a couple of friends, ex Jesse, Vicky, Stacie... but she isn't really close to any of them. 
          
          btw I've already fanned :)