Carmily

@Dream_Craziness I really liked it but at times I felt like she kept throwing the rejection back in his face every time they argued. On one hand part of me felt like she had the right and I would expect that is the way she would act if it was just a romance novel. But, it's not a romance, they are mates and that makes a difference and because they are mates I feel like she shouldn't be throwing it back in his face.  I felt at times that she just didn't want to be with him. I am very happy that you didn't make her forgive him right away cause that would of really annoyed me. I love your writing, is not boring and I enjoy reading it. Anaways that was just my opinion and how I viewed it. 

Carmily

@Dream_Craziness I really liked it but at times I felt like she kept throwing the rejection back in his face every time they argued. On one hand part of me felt like she had the right and I would expect that is the way she would act if it was just a romance novel. But, it's not a romance, they are mates and that makes a difference and because they are mates I feel like she shouldn't be throwing it back in his face.  I felt at times that she just didn't want to be with him. I am very happy that you didn't make her forgive him right away cause that would of really annoyed me. I love your writing, is not boring and I enjoy reading it. Anaways that was just my opinion and how I viewed it.