Caroline Palito

@goldyas123 golden safety: 
            Comfort given to me by the moon 
            Salty tears fall as I question why did you leave me so soon? 
            In a line of 100 hot men I would still pick you
             Eventhough I know you wouldn't do that for me too 
            The hurt and swallowing sadness you gave to me 
            Pieces of me still do live on I guess that's what you call mercy 
            You Made me feel all pink pretty but also dark and depressed
             All these feelings I suppressed when you left 
            Come into my room and pick me up just like in twilight 
            I would give anything to be just with you tonight
             Never knew I could ever feel so blue 
            I guess it's all thanks to you.

Ps: loved your poem, hope u keep writing

@goldyas123 hey! Sorry abt the late reply  (rlly late) I had some problems with my account but I'm back. I made 2 small changes on your text, it's no big deal but it makes your writing easier to read and in correct grammar ^-^
            
            "So sad how love's not enough 
            When all the time that's only what we dream of 
            Lust and darkness are never far 
            All combined is what we truly are 
            Stories about stargazing dashed to oblivion when you left 
            Never could love again as my heart you kept 
            Your selfishness made my eyes wet and prickle 
            As I sit down and remember the happy times you made me giggle 
            I got a war going on in my mind 
            Thinking about how I lost one of a kind."