Carter_S

Carter, we're watching you, you know. We're following every move. Because that's what friends do. Or I think...? I mean, Elise does that to me and so does Jess. You better be back. We all miss you. Even Jess, but she won't admit it. But I know that she's a softy on the inside. Uh oh, she's going to kill me. But that's not the point. The point is that you haven't been here in ages.

Carter, stop ignoring us and just get ur steroid filled butt back to the group!!! Please, I know we can be annoying but we r all friends!! And we really miss u… well, at least I do. The group is falling apart, and I don't want that to happen. Please Carter, it's not the same without u!!

Bro I love ur stories 

@ReneeJakubowski thanks for the advice! I tend to get carried away with the aside and description, so I'll do my best to work on it. 

What a unique story.  I would love to see more dialog between your characters!

@radicxl- no probs

@radicxl- what…?

Bish you remind me  of my classmate John :* XD

good. good.

@fantasylover04 no... Why?