CartoonBoy2009

My Home Movies fan fiction, and to date, the last fan fiction I did https://www.wattpad.com/story/202942462

CameronCasimir

What if there are some cartoon network characters they don't know? Like juniper Lee and robot boy. Should I try to explain it in an origin? And should I put in DC nation 
          characters since their cartoon network characters? Even though I'm make a marvel DC crossover fan fiction?

CameronCasimir

Oh sorry. I've focusing a lot on school and have been very distracted. I'll start working on marvel/dc then cn city
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CartoonBoy2009

@CameronCasimir  Hello, how has your story been going?
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CartoonBoy2009

@CameronCasimir  Sorry for the late reply. Yes, I think it would be a good idea to explain lesser known characters.
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CameronCasimir

cartoon boy, I need a favor. can you read my faniction cn city prototype first and then my other one can city volume one the new city era. indeed you to tell me what you think and what I should do with it.

CartoonBoy2009

@CameronCasimir  you're doing a nice job so far. I would suggest keeping  what  the characters say in quotation marks and maybe making a different paragraph for when a different character speaks. I also think the story should have a bit more of an introduction so readers will know a bit more about the characters and how they're gonna act in story. Such as probably a backstory of how Blossem become a big fan of Ben and how much of a change it is for Ben being in CN City. It's still a bit early in the story so I don't think I can have a full opinion. I think you're doing doing good with the story so far.
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Ghostdog1

So what made yoy get a wattpad?

Ghostdog1

@CartoonBoy2009 I know Wattpad has a homely feeling.
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CartoonBoy2009

@Ghostdog1 Well, Ficwad isn't the best site. One interesting thing is it allows NC-17 rated stories, but the problem is it doesn't have a very big amount of categories for cartoons. Wattpad is much better.
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Ghostdog1

@CartoonBoy2009  I have not. I usually use my wattpad for random ideas I'm too scared to post on my Fanfiction account
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