CassaKnight👑

Hi po. I am a new writer here in Wattpad I have 1 completed and on-going story can you critique my story? Thank you. 
          It means a lot for me your comment. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/248606868?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=jobelsmax&wp_originator=fz7xHy%2BMjvAlXbOAqVY5JMGidieN%2FUCkDj6M40gemqLYxzsBrHbtgdsA6HFpvYckzBfImUCf4T4svOonG6THISeP70OFxS2leR04vcHdGa3GTEeqOQadOCSQ9ZhKByUr

Hi!! I'm new at writing and would appreciate it if you would take a look at my new fanfiction comments and votes are highly appreciated, I totally understand if not! Have a nice day/Night <3
          
          Link to the story: https://my.w.tt/kwt0LUFTt9