Hey! Saw your post on tumblr asking for reviews of your fan fic. I read the first 5 chapters, and I think you're really on a roll! The only thing that needs cleaning up is the spelling/grammar. I know that's not a big deal to a lot of people who read fan fiction, but I'm a bit of a grammar nazi and it's really distracting to me when I'm editing something as I'm reading it. It makes it harder to focus on the content, and appreciate the story. I hope that doesn't come across too harsh, just offering some constructive criticism! Happy writing ;)
