@Casteleijn Your English is amazing for een buitenlander! And I really enjoyed the way you played poetically with the language, intentionally or not. I have eagle eyes for grammar and punctuation from my years teaching English. Most punctuation errors involve punctuation placed outside of quotation marks, when it should be placed inside. But you do work wonders with excellent loaded sentences and wonderful, active prose, so you can get away with some mistakes. Cheers, Merry Christmas!