CatAlley

@princessB1992 It will be sad when their story is over, they have come so far in your book.   To me it doesn't matter then context of the book so much as a couple of key factors:  can i see the book in my head while i am reading it (detail and flow), am i happy and sad that i am done with the book (great characters), and was it believable (even fantasy books can be believable if the author wants it to).  Your book hit all three of my standards, so to me it was a great book.  It will be nice to reread this book all at once after it has been edited more.  I am not so good with grammar, so I don't point out mistakes  :)  As for school, you'll have a blast once you get settled into a groove..  :)  Hope you keep writing, you have a talent for detail when you focus on the story.  Good luck, everything works out.
          	
          	Cat  :)

CatAlley

@princessB1992 It will be sad when their story is over, they have come so far in your book.   To me it doesn't matter then context of the book so much as a couple of key factors:  can i see the book in my head while i am reading it (detail and flow), am i happy and sad that i am done with the book (great characters), and was it believable (even fantasy books can be believable if the author wants it to).  Your book hit all three of my standards, so to me it was a great book.  It will be nice to reread this book all at once after it has been edited more.  I am not so good with grammar, so I don't point out mistakes  :)  As for school, you'll have a blast once you get settled into a groove..  :)  Hope you keep writing, you have a talent for detail when you focus on the story.  Good luck, everything works out.
          
          Cat  :)

princessB1992

@CatAlley See i really don't think its that great. Honestly i just wanted to quit and start a new book, but i knew that the point (or well one of the many points) was to complete a book and now i'm happy! I have only one chapter left and i'm so excited and yet so sad. I'm going to edit it and rewrite and add ALOT then i will post what I have done again. Edited version. Then i'm going to give it to acouple other people and get them to edit it as well. Thank you for the words of encouragement for college. I"m so nervous yet so excited! I hope that I will have the time and the will power to continue to write while in college. Thank you for becoming a fan and being one of my favorite fans! :D I love the fans that stick out to me. ITs AWESOME! :D 
          Michelle :)

CatAlley

@princessB1992 I finally got done with both of them.  All I have to say for the ending was amazing...i woke up my son sleeping on the couch next to me laughing....  Thank you for becoming my fan.  I really didn't expect any as I am not a writer and have no desire to write.  I am just your everyday reader...who does read a lot...but none the less..just a reader.  Thank you again for faning me.  I hope to read more books that i am sure you will write in the future.  Good luck in school and i am sure everyone as well as myself will expect something while you are home  over Thanksgiving break.  Happy writing and thank you again for this great book.  
          
          Cat  :)

princessB1992

I updated my book. Two new chapters if you would like to check it out?! I would LOVE your comments you are such a great fan. I greatly appreciate it! :D I'm glad you have a fan now. I didn't know i wasn't your fan or else i would have done it long ago. :D

sweetface

@CatAlley Well it's not of the vampire genre, its classed under historical fiction, but partly based on a true story. it's completed but it's kind of short like 70 pages long.  The story really gripped me and I just had to tell others.. the author is called thebrendamantz. It may not be to your liking but you can just give it a shot.

sweetface

I've been reading this book called pungo creek, which i personally think is a great read, i think you would like it, i took a break from writing to read others stories and came across this book, since you are an avid reader, i thought you may like this.... you can check it out if you want. 
          
          ps,,, its nothing like my stories...