Here's a story plan for a chapter in my book and I need your opinion on it.
Violet, Samena and Koda are on a day out when some thugs approach them and hurt Koda. Violet keeps Samena safe as her demon eyes form but something happens she turns into a demon scaring the thugs away. The bat family find out about the secret Violet's been hiding and question if she's a demon and start calling her that. Violet gets upset/mad and hurts the next person who calls her demon before running off. While she's calming down on the rooftops she bumps into the joker who holds up a badly wounded Dick Grayson. She turns demon and attacks the Joker, however, when she gets to the hospital to help her beloved she finds out that it may be too late for him.
Ends on a cliffhanger ready for next chapter