Wow, re-read my old stuff and man, I am cringe.
On another topic.
I've been seeing stories with great potential and ideas, but I cannot for the life of me read them, because they're either largely bigot, OOC, no actual punctuation or paragraphs, sh*t grammar, REALLY awkward dialogue, Mary Sues/ Gary Stus. And I literally can't say that I'm not guilty of those things. In my defence- English isn't my first language.
Haha anyways
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