coollion2873
how's the chapter so far maybe after this story we can start the fanny and the pack story
Catnery
coollion2873
that night chicken little and foxy are celebrating their victory and have a talk with his dad but dosen't after he leaves chicken little and foxy are happy and thank the star they see it approching but chicken little thinks he's seeing things until it hits them they stagger a little and see the piece which makes them scream this catches the attention of buck and hide it he enters but they scoff it off they said they fell off the bed he believes them and leaves they check the covers and see it's gone foxy walks until it's she trips and see it's invisible they bring it to the sky and makes them gasp they call abby and the others they arrive and try to figure out how to deal with it fish plays with it a little and soon lifts him to the sky and taken they follow his trail and end up in the baseball field and duck for cover they are soon in the precene of a UFO and aliens come out runt thinks fish is gone but foxy spots him the UFO and makes them gasp
coollion2873
i see you posted the story. the cow's name is caramel and the bunny's name is smiling jacks.
i want to say i'm sorry for these multiple stories were doing and very sorry.
i think the next story will have fanny and the pack teaming up with the bad guys
Catnery
@coollion2873 And besides that, I've already corrected the part of the Smiling Jacks and Caramelo presentation.
Catnery
@coollion2873 Okay, but from now on we're going to finish the other stories we're writing before starting new ones, okay?
Cooldog14789
Nice chapter I think you forgot to add the bunny to the group
coollion2873
as for texas and april they are no longer sheriff and deputy but are officers of LAPD with gold springs being bull dowsed by the county and no longer a western town. she and april moved to LA where they became partners with luggins but they hold a dark secret they meet diane and became partners with her as theives called the brown paw and orange paw.
coollion2873
ok i resent you chapter 1 you can shorten out the details so the chapter won't to be so long.
coollion2873
happy mothers day how's chapter 1 of the new story so far.
coollion2873
@Catnery ok here's chapter 1 the intro is mostly the same but roxxie and georgia are with wolf and snake the chase scene is the same with each the bad guys and girls being introduced one at a time first webs, then jacks, then shark, then annabelle, then lucy and Valentine and last piranha running close to the police station. i also forgot how they joined. they moved from texas to LA. where annabelle lost her bar to bunch of thugs and burned it down where she soon went back to her old ways of being a bad girl and moved to LA to avoid capture, georgia after the athorties were hot on her tail for being corrupted she went with the girls to LA since it's the only place where crooks and criminals, and corrupt cops can live in. roxxie goes with them because with the heat catching up she makes a quick move to escape capture and since LA dosen't have any records of them, smiling jacks after her cattle rustling gang betrayed her after a failed job her families ranch and farm was destroyed as revenge and her animals sold to the slaughter house including her cow she joins up with the girls to move to LA to get Away from her families history and forget about being a cattle rustler and start a new criminal career by joining a new gang they form called the bad guys and girls in LA. as for lucy and valentine where their enterprise extablishment was close to shut down and the cops waiting to arrest them for tax fraud they join the girls to escape the cops and avoid arrest. you can shorten the details if you want.
Catnery
@coollion2873 Hi, could you send me the chapter of the new story again? It's just that I'm in the orchestras almost all day and I passed my college thesis and now we're looking at the documents for completion.
coollion2873
hope chapter 1 of the new story might come soon
coollion2873
i liked the new chapter. good luck with the first chapter of the new story
coollion2873
think someday this month the first chapter of the new story might be posted?
i also want to say i'm sorry for all the multiple stories were doing i'm very sorry.
coollion2873
@Catnery thanks will the next chapter be the first chapter of the new story for the summer.
Catnery
@coollion2873 I've already finished the new chapter of the Helluva Boss crossover and All Dogs Go to Heaven.