Hi guys, as some of you may know (I posted a status concerning it a few weeks ago) I recently signed up to a Space Pan-Bandom AU challenge, for which I have to write a short story for my chosen fandom (MCR, duh) set in or inspired by space and challenges mean I have deadlines and check-ins (my two most feared concepts. Send help!) so I'm going to post my work thus far on those days so that hopefully you guys can tell me what's working and what's not. That way I can edit and make changes before the final deadline.
The first check-in is tomorrow and I'd greatly appreciate it if some of my more regular readers would check it out and give me your honest opinions on the work so far.
It's called Why You'd Want to Live Here so look out for the title.