CattinessBlue

@LadyAireen oh, my bad. :) i just love angels. 
          	Yeah i would love to thanks!

cappuchienooo

No, I didn't read Fallen. I hated it, no offense. We probably have the same references, but we don't have the same story at all. 
          
          I know right? That's what I'll try to change in the new version. I mean, I felt like Rosaline isn't Rosaline in my head. I dunno what's happening to me, so many inconsistencies. I have the new chapter 1 in private. You wanna check it?

CattinessBlue

@LadyAireen the 1st fourteen chapters were great u dont have to edit much. For her personality, i just notice that shes always scared. But i do understand that because something weird is happening to her. I know in the end she'll be brave enough to face her enemy. the thing that i love her is that she loves children and her family. :)
          
          Hey, do you know the book fallen by lauren kate? Your story is a little bit similar to that. But i love the twist of your story. :) so im really eager to finish your story.

cappuchienooo

Thank you ;) I'm Mica, btw. I followed you so I can dedicate something. 
          
          I dunno if I should edit the fourteen chapters with the other version. I think the readers will kill me for being so indecisive T.T 
          
          Aww, really? Thank you for being this dedicated. I'm just having a hard time with Rosaline's personality. It's so unstable in my head

cappuchienooo

I love it when women rule too :D HAHA. FEMALE PRIIIIDE, and that's exactly what I am going to portray.
          As it is, I've met many problems in writing this version but for the sake of completion, I'll try to finish it. But there'll be another version offline, and I'll prolly not post it until I decide otherwise. I hope you stick with me till the end :)