Hey, just as a heads up I took that part down. I feel like it progressed too quickly so I am going to edit it and post it again tomorrow. But I can tell you that your feeling about Karma and Jeremy might just be true...
@VampireDiaries1313 It was good, the only thing I noticed was the tense shifts from past to present randomly in the text. But i do the same thing sometimes too. Other than that I really liked it.