Live2sing

Hey i was wondering if you could possibly take a peek at my new story called His Million Watt Smile. It's a really cheesy predictable story but i would be forever grateful if you could read it and comment. Thank you so much!

Deep4141

Hi,wassup?  
          I have uploaded the THIRD chapter of my story "Die Another Death: The Underworld relocated.........right into my town !!!" I would very much like it if u could read it and comment on it. Feel free to criticize, point out typos and so on. If u like it, maybe u could vote for it and become a fan. ;-) :)) I will return the favour for ur works. Thanks in advance !!!   ;-)  ;-)  Here's the link to my story- 
          http://www.wattpad.com/482278-die-another-death-the-underworld-relocated-right

nicolle1496

hey! sorry if these messages annoy you but could you checkout my story 'heart shaped scratch' and tell me what you think?
          the grammar is kinda suckish but... uhm... I don't think its horrible though (i hope)
          ok so uhm thanks if you do read.
          nicolle1496 xx
          
          p.s you picked the right team ;) edward <3