Wisetoe6391
Hey, I just stumbled across your fanfic. You have potential; there are a lot of things to improve, but nobody's born knowing everything. I also created a GuP fanfic, also with boys, but with a different focus.
Wisetoe6391
Don't worry, I come in peace. I have no intention of criticizing you harshly or anything. I saw your fanfic and despite a few clichés, it's not bad.