To anyone interested, an updated version of Chapter XI of Scents Of Clementine is up and running! It would be great to know what you think about how the characters are evolving and engaging with each other... I am personally getting very fond of them.
I don't know what happened, but at the beginning I kind of disliked Elliot a bit, and now he's turning out to be a genuinely lovely person -- even if he's still a teensy bit pretentious. I'm not sure, though, if Gabby is convinced by him...
https://www.wattpad.com/1620317880-scents-of-clementine-chapter-xi