CellophaneJane

Great start Mobleez, lovely use of adjectives to describe the location, i could almost reach out and touch the "red place".  Interesting story line, can't wait to read the rest....

Mob lees, can you write a story where the parents are together?
          

Where's the romance in this one Mobleez?? 
          CJ

Yes of course, is it still on Wattpad? 
          

It says at the top of your page reviewer extraordinaire...please could you review my story?