Cephas Gabriel

Hey all, this is my new book!!! Read it and maybe criticize it. I will gladly listen to all your opinions. Am ready to learn too. Thanks 
          I just published "ARIA'S TREACHEROUS PLOT" of my story "QUEEN OF ARZDON ". https://www.wattpad.com/1349170587?utm_source=android&utm_medium=profile&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=Cephas-Gabriel&wp_originator=P8LAvZtQXYiaH%2BvugvijlxCB5VIS%2F36oD7uDxtDYC0S%2F16nou%2Fvy8ANpru7Oy3s5bWME5PVUMxkOPkp9hqfMx119qYVDJAoWZOW9b7hTu8DOY%2F%2BjGyWhAZQuov38s9yS

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Hey... This is my first book to write ✍️, and I've just published chapter 01 and I need critics who are genuine. Read my chapter and rectify me or teach me some new things . Thanks