Cephas Lance

If anyone wants to be in the sequel to Pokemon: Chaos Wish, please comment here

Okay guys, dilemma time. If any of my followers read The Polymorph Chronicles, I need some advice. After looking over the older drafts I realized that they are potentially better than what I got now. Should I go with the old story or the new? I would love to hear some feedback.

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