Certi-sam

Hey, I'd like to know if you guys r enjoying my fic and if there's anything I could do to improve it

tinc4n

@Certi-sam ooh alright, I get it now, and ur welcome for the feedback!
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Certi-sam

@tinc4n thx for the feedback, as for Chloe and Zoey having more Personas. It can only be Nikki as she's the resident of the Velvet Room
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tinc4n

@Certi-sam I'm liking all of Nikki's personas (but chloe and zoey fr should have some more)! idk if the indicators for the times of day are a part of your work, but I'm guessing that you're just incorporating the p4 style into here. at least the characters aren't speaking in text abbreviations
          	  
          	  my only suggestion is to avoid dragging out fight scenes longer than necessary. combat descriptions should be concise to quicken the pace and add a frantic tone to the fight. that's just my take, tho!
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tinc4n

you're a very cool guy. I think it's just bc ur the only user who I've interacted with the most and how barren it's felt lately regarding the lack of any interactions on my fics, even if they're as simple as clicks/reads. im goin cuckoo, idk bruzz. I never thought having an online acquaintance would be kinda exciting for me to have
          
          anyways that's the only ramble I wanted to share with ya, nothing major. this might not be a comment on your fic, but it's smth!

tinc4n

erm akshually☝️ I already commented on your post. I'm AssistanceRemote9633 (the user's wacky, ik)
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Certi-sam

@tinc4n you don't have to worry about that
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tinc4n

@Certi-sam I'm surprised how quickly you respond, 'ole mole. but thanks for that! I just hope you don't see our convos as business communication matters or anything too professional lol
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tinc4n

@Certi-sam would it sound stalker-ish if I told you that I stumbled upon your reddit account a few weeks ago by accident? it was just surprising to see you on there :)

tinc4n

@Certi-sam ohh thanks!!
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Certi-sam

@tinc4n no if it was an accident I don't see a problem
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Certi-sam

Hey, I'd like to know if you guys r enjoying my fic and if there's anything I could do to improve it

tinc4n

@Certi-sam ooh alright, I get it now, and ur welcome for the feedback!
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Certi-sam

@tinc4n thx for the feedback, as for Chloe and Zoey having more Personas. It can only be Nikki as she's the resident of the Velvet Room
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tinc4n

@Certi-sam I'm liking all of Nikki's personas (but chloe and zoey fr should have some more)! idk if the indicators for the times of day are a part of your work, but I'm guessing that you're just incorporating the p4 style into here. at least the characters aren't speaking in text abbreviations
            
            my only suggestion is to avoid dragging out fight scenes longer than necessary. combat descriptions should be concise to quicken the pace and add a frantic tone to the fight. that's just my take, tho!
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