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@EtherealWriter005 Sorry. I wanted to write 'CAN'T change it.' I understand. Thank you so much ^_^

@EtherealWriter005 you don't have to change all of it in your story. Constructive criticism is for you to continue your work with more information about your readerships opinion on it and/or make new projects that are better. I am in no way telling you to change the already existing story to fit my criteria. I really like your writing style and would love to see you improve :)

@EtherealWriter005 I'll agree about the pacing, I do find it ... Not appealing, sometimes when I read the story at the start. Actually, over the time I have been writing the story, I have realized some of the mistakes you mentioned. But, I can change it all. Not now atleast. I would like to wait for the story to be finished. I also understand the part where I could have completed the whole drama in four chapters. Thank you for your tips! And, no you weren't too direct. I found this useful. Thank you ^_^