@Jss2141 i may sound brutal but  after  years of reading delaying and confusing fanfics i thank people would cheach themselfs and say hey this  story insnt going smothly with to much going on  giving  the antaganist the upper hand  and jumping  from unfinish probelms  and all filler and less story you would understand that it has to flow and conect which this stories arent and take it from me smart buy with a very high gpa of 3. 99 you have to take your story in your hands not let some secound party write your stories into a wall and if you read my loud house hazbin hotel lincoln morningstar fanfic on wattpad which for now is just in its set up stage chapters and the none stop fast over powered adventurs begins