ChalWahanJaateHain

Hello! Are you guys liking Beikthiyar? I would love to get some feedback <3

ChalWahanJaateHain

@VadapalliPrasanthi Thank you so much!!! I’m very happy you are liking it, it truly means a lot and is very motivating :)
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VadapalliPrasanthi

@ChalWahanJaateHain  I'm literally drowing in love with both them and silence chemistry between them and I'm hoping to see more romantic getsures between noori and zarrar and involvement of bilal in it!!
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ifra1810

Hey just wondering when you’ll be updating raat humari toh. I hope you do so soon 
          Thank you

ChalWahanJaateHain

@ifra1810 thank you so much and thanks for your patience <3 
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ifra1810

Take your time I can’t wait to see how you end it. Xxx
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ChalWahanJaateHain

Hi!! I am not sure yet. It is on my to-do list, but I haven’t gotten the motivation or inspiration for it yet. I am waiting for the spark so I can write something that was worth the wait and the ending of the story. Sorry for the wait and thank you for being so patient! 
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alphacharliee

Hiiiii, I just discovered ur book beikhtiyaar and read it all, I'm so curious how it unfolds honestly, I think zarrar is definitely committed to Alina in someway and he went to usa to celebrate his birthday with her... Ugh personally I don't like the elements of foreign girlfriend but then ML is also gaining interest in the FL like personally find it cheap, he didn't talk to her for 15 years, has a woman as well but as soon as he met our girl he started liking her as wellll, it's unfair, I ship her with Bilal tbh Bilal is so genuine towards her.

InspiredJams

I get youu, I'm still team Bilal hahah  Sure, Zarrar has been shown gentle and kind in the recent chapters which highlight his goodness which we as readers weren't deeply familiar with previously, but Bilal is so genuine and committed. >>>
            It hurts to see him hurting eeek. I don't know when I'll come around to see Zarrar as a main lead heheh. 
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ChalWahanJaateHain

@alphacharliee haha it’s clear you are team Bilal. Thanks for letting me know your thoughts!! 
            
            Wow thank you! I appreciate that!! Which city do you live in if you don’t mind me asking?
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InspiredJams

I really like your writing style hehe, and here's what I have observed so far! 
          I think Zarrar and Tina are together, based on their interactions and how he's been on call so much ever since he's been here. And from what I know, they came together by flight too. So, I'm sad about that, however it doesn't look like Zarrar's very invested into it - he did talk about how it's hard for him to trust people in relationships. I think Noor is a bit clouded with delusion because of how nice he's been to her so far, but I hope he's not seeing her as his little sister 
          I really admire Bilal with how much he feels for Noor. I ship them  because his feelings are so genuine and strong and we haven't seen Zarrar feeling anything for Noor as a man yet. It's hard to imagine them together unlike Bilal.
          
          I am shipping them for the first half if Zarrar and Tina are together hahaha.
          I also feel like Zulfikar's murder is a conspiracy that has a lot to do with the other business guy, I forgot his name. 
          Oh, and I really don't want to go through what Salaar went through during Heer's relationship. I don't wish to see Noor go through the same phase in the first half. It is difficult as a spectator because of our empathy as a reader and specially when we're seeing ourselves in the characters like Noor has been doing currently with her novels. 
          
          Waiting for Fawaad and Alizey's updates toooo. 
          
          PS. I think you really loved Peer e Kamil and Aab e Hayat as a reader? Hahah. 
          I see it in some places hehe. 
          I loved it too. 

ChalWahanJaateHain

@InspiredJams Hello!!! It’s so nice to hear from you <3 !!! Thank you for your kind words, it means a lot. And ooo very, very good observations. It really is so rewarding to me for you to pick up on the small details. Thanks for reading and giving my writing your time! Also thank you for giving me this feedback! It has definitely been the highlight of my day <3
            
            Very interesting that you ship Bilal and Noor! Based on the poll at the end of one of the chapters, everyone thought he was sus hahah.. but I’m glad to hear these different opinions!
            
            Hmm Rohail Asghar is who you’re thinking of. Let’s see what he adds to the story.. 
            
            Do you see yourself in Noor? Are there parts of her you find relatable so far?
            
            Yesss I haven’t forgotten about Fawad and Alizey! It’s just I currently feel an excitement for Beikhtiyar that I haven’t felt in a while so just trying to make use of that before it goes away hehe, but I hope to get back to finishing up RHT soon.
            
            OMG HOW DID YOU KNOW THAT!!!!!! What made you notice that??? Please let me know! I LOVEEE Peer-e-Kamil and Aab-e-Hayat!!! I just listened to them for the first time this past July.
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fiduniya_walakhira

Wow, it's the only word that comes out of me after reading beikhtiyar it's such a heart warming novel every time I read it's new chapter it's always leaves my heart full and content you are doing exceptional job really I look forward for you to upload the chapters thankyou for writing it can't wait to more chapters super soon and ohh!! The chemestry it's A.M.A.Z.I.N.G

ChalWahanJaateHain

Sobbingggg thank you so much for your kind words! It makes me feel on top of the world when I hear people appreciate my work, especially when the book has just started. Thank you for reading, loving, and giving my work your time and feedback! I hope you will continue reading and letting me know your thoughts <3
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ChalWahanJaateHain

Hello! Are you guys liking Beikthiyar? I would love to get some feedback <3

ChalWahanJaateHain

@VadapalliPrasanthi Thank you so much!!! I’m very happy you are liking it, it truly means a lot and is very motivating :)
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VadapalliPrasanthi

@ChalWahanJaateHain  I'm literally drowing in love with both them and silence chemistry between them and I'm hoping to see more romantic getsures between noori and zarrar and involvement of bilal in it!!
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ChalWahanJaateHain

Do you guys require English translations or is it okay if I don’t put them?

ChalWahanJaateHain

@YusufAyomide8 Interesting! Thanks! I really appreciate it! I am also sad it’s coming to an end. I feel like it’s the longest I’ve spent writing a book but for some reason it doesn’t feel that way… I also like a lot of Bollywood movies!
            
            Thank you! May Allah bless you too <3
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YusufAyomide8

@ChalWahanJaateHain How I came across the book, I'm a fan of love stories especially when the characters are Muslim and know the boundaries of islam, and the story of fazey caught my fancy and I became a great lover of it. Infact I do come to wattpad every day to check if it has been posted. So sad it's ending soon  . I'm literally a great fan of Indian movies and  I also became a fan of Indian stories  though I wish to Urdu 
            
            
            Anyway it was nice reading your stories, .
            May Allah grant you more knowledge and understanding. 
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ChalWahanJaateHain

@YusufAyomide8 Okay I will put them then… just out of curiosity, how did you come across my books or what made you read them given you don’t understand Urdu ?
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VadapalliPrasanthi

@ChalWahanJaateHain  the first chapter of ur new book was very interesting and emotional rollercoaster slicing btw them and I request you get the imagination for the characters of noor and zarrar in the same way you gave us our faddi and alizey who were my best troop for symbol like wajah and yumna as I always imagine them only as main leads so, i hope who are new characters for this story??