Just a guy who's trying to write an awsome story. I'm very passionate about this story and would really appreciate some comments and some constructive critisism. Or we could just talk, thats cool too. I'm 19 and trying to make my way as a writer, (although I have no idea how thats going right now lol). Feel free to give me some advice
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Story by Champatizer
Melodies Bloom In The Dark
He's tall, muscular and handsome, with the voice and talent of an angel. With a man of these qualities you'd...