CharleneWW

For the record I'm an English major and a close friend of ShadowCheah and everything you have posted to her in her story isn't constructive criticism like what you are actually taught when editing. If you were a literary editor and said anything like that to a writer you would be fired. If you don't like a story then don't read it, but don't be that nasty because you're bored or whatever your malicious reason was to be horrible.
          Would you honestly like someone to post such horrible things about something you're proud of? Everyone makes mistakes and even my stories have need of editing because I post the chapters as soon as I've done them, and the person you're basically calling thick is getting a first in her degree at a top university.
          Ps. Just remember that when you go to criticise someone, make sure that you're grammar is perfect because, reading your comments, there are quite a few grammatical errors and you write colloquially, which you aren't meant to do.

You now, you have every right to read something and don't like it.. I read some books here that are not good, but I JUST STOP READING! I dont offend the author!!! If I think the person needs to grow as a writer, there is a huge difference between constructive criticism and offense. but small minded people can't see the difference, right?

Internet troll!!! I doubt you would keep the same tone if you faced @shadowcheah face to face! People like you are total coward, can only offend by the internet because on the real life are bullied like no other. I pity you.

Many thanks for the votes on The Sheldak Flower - glad that you are enjoying it

Hi Charlene, thanks for your vote for Tales of the Journeyman. The Golden Arch - PROLOGUE.

Hi Charlene, thank you for your vote for Tales of the Journeyman. The Golden Arch - Chapter 9. Rolly's Return..I hope you enjoy the rest of the story

Thanks for the comment and vote for "Cain." Yes, you are correct, the novel is "non-biblical." It is Historical Fiction, I have simply used the biblical character of Cain as a foundation for the story, but all other facts, i.e. the Egyptian empire, the Romans, Nazis, etc, are based on actual proven facts. I spent over four months purely on research, mainly the website Wikipedia to make sure all my facts were correct. I hope you enjoy the rest of my novel. Please also check out my fantasy book "Dark Messiah." Thanks.