Charles59

This was a great story and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.Great world you created and great characters and plot.I could AZàgo on with commentary beyond my level of expertise but im just an avid  reader not a literary critic.But i know a good story when I read one. Read this story if your a fan of this genre .And if not a fan read it you may be a fan afterwards.
          	thanks for sharing
          	Peace
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/299626910

Charles59

This was a great story and I thoroughly enjoyed reading this.Great world you created and great characters and plot.I could AZàgo on with commentary beyond my level of expertise but im just an avid  reader not a literary critic.But i know a good story when I read one. Read this story if your a fan of this genre .And if not a fan read it you may be a fan afterwards.
          thanks for sharing
          Peace
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/299626910