Charlie

@Mel_1995 Here it is :) http://i1095.photobucket.com/albums/i473/charleebucket/Book%20covers/elcover2.jpg

hey charlie! 
          could I please have the link for the cover you made me ? :)
          I'm sorry, I totally forgot about it. I kinda wanted to vomit on that particular story, I was getting epically frustrated... I have issues with writing. I want to be a perfectionist as much as I can but I am so so lazy. Takes me so long to write! :(
          Please and thankyou :)

Hello there!
          How are ya?

Your storyline's good, some things need to be changed though as they seem unrealistic. Like when Sage kills Riley's mom, they end up laughing, he doesn't seem sad at all at the loss of an important family member. Also, Riley sounds a bit feminine, even though he's young, he shouldn't keep wining like that and getting scared out of his wits when the other girl has the guts of iron. That's about it, there aren't any major flaws in your story, just some minor errors which I'm sure you can improve upin! :-)
          Ceeya around!
          *Rock&Zombiez!*
          -Vz-

and check out this if you have time, it's a great crime story!
          http://www.wattpad.com/1443498-the-killer-in-room-212

@AmaScrivere @lildani @Ichigo_Lover @PerfectlyLonely @frakkevin @mamie1990 @Fallzswimmer
          Hi all! I've updated my story, and if you check it out/offer any criticism, I'd really appreciate it! Thank you!

Hey could you please read my stories, I'd really appreciate it :) They're twilight fanfiction.Thanks x

@lildani. I know!!! That's Exactly what I said!!!
          But then my friend was like "Nah, patrick is way cooler."
          And I was like "Angelec...-_-"
          XD

@lildani @CharlieBucket 
          hahahaha I think my favorites are "You're the Banana King,Charlie!!! You're the Banana King!"
          "I'm am NOT the Banana King!!"
          *twenty seconds later*
          "I'm the Banana King....I'm the BANANA KING!!" lol
          and then mahh favorite song in the universe....
          PUT A BANANA IN YOUR EAR!!!!!!!

@lildani @Tanti101
          BLAERAGHHHH
          It has spoken! It has showed us the way!
          It didn't *say* anything!