@CharlotteCanyon
Thank you for sharing for free what you have written so far for The Moon Wolf.
I eagerly await any continuation either free or paid. While clearly a first draft from an editorial standpoint, the plot and world building is superb.
Please keep up the amazing work!
How come the Moonwolf is unfinished??? So annoying to start a book and it's unfinished!! No epilogue No sorry!!
Just an FYI, I have also found this book on other apps, but it has 500+ chapters. It seems to be word for word this story, but goes for obviously much longer.
Hello, just wanted to let you know I saw an ad on Facebook for a PPC app called Chill Stories that has taken The Moon Wolf. Wanted to give you a heads up.
Hi would you be so kind to check my book
@charlotte Canyon I’ve just read to chapter 43 of Moon wolf and am dying to know what happens with the rest of Penns story but have seen there hasn’t been an update for a while. Will there be more soon
Absolutely love "The Moon Wolf". Hope all is well as I (im)patiently wait for more chapters.
@CharlotteCanyon I have been watching daily for an update to Slipstreet. I really hope you haven't given up on that story. There aren't that many that capture and hold attention, and aren't peppered with bad boys, vampires or Mafia. It's still in my reading list.
@CharlotteCanyon Have been waiting patiently for the update to Slip Street, but food and water have run out, and I am becoming delirious. Does this story still exist? Send help . . .
I read everything available for The Moon Wolf and I like the story (rather a lot). I have a few critiques I'd like to share, I hope you don't mind.
First, let me preface with my POV on English is American English, not "British" English. The little nuances of the E or OU and things like that don't particularly trouble me. In particular, "aught" and "tare" did confuse me. I looked them up to see if, maybe, those versions were recognized and used. However, my dictionary claims they are archaic terms. I've seen tare used for scales, but not the way you've used it in your writing. For my own curiosity, are people still commonly using it in your region?
The second thing I want to say is I really, truly like how you step off from the trope I see with almost every other werewolf story (not being able to shift until 16/18, a wolf alter ego, and the immediate mate bonds). I like that your wolves are more... traditional.
The third thing I want to say... Mia, the 2-3 year old character, cries and gestures, but never speaks. It is understandable in cases of trauma some people revert backwards, in a sense, or form a sort of disability - like blindness or going mute. A 2yr old should be speaking, at least words if not very simple sentences. If you are interested you could always look at the CDC or American Pediatrics for the 24 month/2yr old developmental milestones. The grabby hands are terribly cute and difficult to ignore when a toddler reaches up to you, but coupled with a cherub face and sweet voice chirping is heartwarming. I feel like it would add to Mia's charm if she spoke a few words, especially to Penn.
My other thoughts I'll hold onto until the story is finished. Comparatively, it is well written and a delightful break from the usual tropes and "cringe" of werewolf stories.