Hey @Charlotte_Blackwell
So I just finished reading Lola, and I was pleasantly surprised with such a refreshing read. I loved how the storyline progressed, and all the inner turmoils of the protagonists displayed out, both the raw as well as cringe worthy parts, you didn't shy away from making them real, and honestly speaking, humans don't edit their thoughts and present them in the most succinct and literature worthy way. I liked it a lot, and as I said before, refreshing.
About the storyline itself, I was surprised, annoyed, kept on tenterhooks, excited, let down, and excited again, at different times, and it was a very good experience. I finished the book in 4 hours, and I want to read it again.
I hope your work reaches a wider audience and you can make a difference!
Hope you keep writing.
All the best!