oki so I made a lil research and here is my opinion, to improve William's description, try to focus on the physical weight and sensory disconnect of his legs while highlighting his internal struggle with dependency, showing how he regains his agency through the grit of 1940s rehabilitation at Stoke Mandeville.
Thanks so much , and no worries!
I really hope you love it!
Please leave some detailed feedback if you do.
Ofc , I would love to read your book!
Will add to library.