Is this a good hook?
“He’s been out there too long, no dragon can fly that long without breaks”.
“He was gliding”.
“That doesn’t change anything. He’d get hungry, thirsty, maybe even just tired,” Vill shifted uncomfortably, “We’re going to go find him,”
“We should get the Patrollers, they could find him!”
“The Patrollers won’t listen to us,”
“Why wouldn’t they? Is it because you’re a Magma Dragon? I can repor-”
“No, they still won’t listen!” Vill interrupted, her voice was a low angry hiss. Tears were forming in her eyes. She wiped them away then continued, “We’re doing it ourselves.''
