@ doa_imagination Hello, just finished reading the story and the story looks good, besides the average grammar mistakes but that can be easily fixed, and unfortunally I can't really give anything about the story since it's too early to say something, but from the things that are there' it looks like it will be quite good.
Also, not related to the story but, where did you find me? I've read quite a lot of stories Im not proud to say i've read.
Hope you have a nice day!