Chayma22chou07

Do you guys want another chapter? But I expect comments guys or I wouldn't update XD. 

Shr33ba

@Chayma22chou07 plz update soon... Was desparately waiting for your next updates
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gamer0016

@Chayma22chou07 yes yes yes 
          	  We will give you tonnes of comments 
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abirrosa2

Hello @Chayma22chou07 
          
          I hope you are doing well. This is the second time I am posting on your profile. I just want to let you know how good your books are. Especially My severe brother and The Carnells. A book is good when the words become more than just pages we read, it comes to life and for me your book helped me through a lot of bad things, it was my anchor in difficult moments. So for me, it is not just words I read, it is more than that. When I first found it, I was so excited because it checked all my favourite topics and book genres. But when I first started reading it, it excceded my expectations and I got attached to it.
          
          Finally, I had the time to finish the last chapters and I wanted to say they are amazing. I can't wait for more. I don't want the book to end. I already read it 2 times and I plan for the third. I can't get enough of my favourite characters. 
          
          I liked how you developed your characters, how Marco was the strict scary boss and became the strict but loving brother. How he learned to balance his roles so well. 
          
          The thing I liked the most is how your characters changed, I mean Luke in the very first chapters is not the same Luke as the last chapter. That's how good you are at writing and giving your characters a certain charm. So please keep going because I love your writing and your style, don't change it for anything. 
          
          Now, I have a little dream that I hope will come true. A book named: 
          "The Carnells: Next generation" 
          
          I always imagine a little version of Marco who will be adorable but terrifying at the same time. I mean I can't imagine the chaos he will make  It will be Karma in her best picture  
          
          Have a good day and I hope for more from you. Keep going and I promise to always support you. 
          
          By the way, I am from Algeria so we are particularly neighbours. 

Chayma22chou07

@abirrosa2 Awww thank you very much for this cute heartwarming feedback ❤️
            Glad to have you with me in this journey :)
            
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Iflovefai

Sooo .....I was bored...so I once again ended up reading my severe brother from the very start. This was 3rd time... maybe 4th. But no matter how many times I read it's always fun and addictive. Always. This that good. But what I found for the very first time and came as a surprise is emmets age! Idk how I missed reading it before but somehow I have never came across that character page at the very last of this book. All this time while I was reading this story I assumed emmet to be an oldie... probably in his late 30s or early 40. But .....he is just in his 20s. 

abirrosa2

@Iflovefai hhhhh the same thing happened to me with Fred. I thought he was an old man Lol 
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Iflovefai

@Chayma22chou07 nooooo please don't change anything. It's perfect the way it is. If you have another idea you can do a separate oneshot book maybe? But please don't change this one. The change in marco's behaviour was so heartwarming. 
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Chayma22chou07

@Iflovefai Hahahahah  Wooow I'm surprised that you thought he is 40 
            
            Hope you didn't hate Marco again
            I was thinking of editing the book and change Peter's behavior a bit with Marc in the beginning... Idk give me your opinion 
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Chayma22chou07

Do you guys want another chapter? But I expect comments guys or I wouldn't update XD. 

Shr33ba

@Chayma22chou07 plz update soon... Was desparately waiting for your next updates
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gamer0016

@Chayma22chou07 yes yes yes 
            We will give you tonnes of comments 
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Iflovefai

Is it tooo early to ask for an update? I'm sorry I just can't wait  hope you are doing well and writing good good contents

Iflovefai

@Chayma22chou07 ofcourse I want you to update....I don't want this story to stop....ever if possible. Please update cz this story is epic. Please do update 
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Chayma22chou07

@Iflovefai I was actually gonna ask you readers if you want an update hahah
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gamer0016

Heyyyy 
          How are you doing?
          Hope everything is fine 

gamer0016

@Chayma22chou07 
            Hey 
            I am doing ok 
            But my grandfather is in the hospital. He got in an accident. Luckily, he didn't get hurt much, but there are a couple of deep wounds on his head. 
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Chayma22chou07

@gamer0016 Hey, beautiful ❤️ 
            I'm okay, thank you. How are you? 
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kvs999

Hey Author..carnell status is showing as completed..thought of letting know

kvs999

@Chayma22chou07 ...yeah sure...also bonus chapters would also do...in carnells like..now. ....
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Chayma22chou07

@kvs999 I can't write book three but I can carry on the Carnells in another universe 
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kvs999

@Chayma22chou07 ..yes...so loving it.
            ...thank you for wonderful story..i think you should come with book 3...esp around marco, pete and luke..
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